Pitch feedback

Pitch feedback review

We presented our prezi and treatment for our short film called 'Facebook Famous' the concept of our film was understood easily by our target audience. The target audience understood that would be using song lyrics instead of speech, the target audience advised us that we should use both speech and song lyrics as it wouldn't work as well with just song lyrics. The target audience also mentioned the idea was very unique but we had to present it differently compared to our inparation videos, maybe something they could relate to or understand. Overall our target audience are interested with our short film.