We drew a couple of scenes for the short film storyboard and we also found some songs that we were able to use.
Wednesday, October 16, 2013
Meetings
Another way we thought it would be a good idea to keep in touch outside of
college was to Skype one another so we can discuss the work and the story
boards with Skype we will be able to send pictures of the story boards to help
us get our pre production finished.
Pitch feedback
Pitch feedback review
We presented our prezi and treatment for our short film called 'Facebook Famous' the concept of our film was understood easily by our target audience. The target audience understood that would be using song lyrics instead of speech, the target audience advised us that we should use both speech and song lyrics as it wouldn't work as well with just song lyrics. The target audience also mentioned the idea was very unique but we had to present it differently compared to our inparation videos, maybe something they could relate to or understand. Overall our target audience are interested with our short film.
We presented our prezi and treatment for our short film called 'Facebook Famous' the concept of our film was understood easily by our target audience. The target audience understood that would be using song lyrics instead of speech, the target audience advised us that we should use both speech and song lyrics as it wouldn't work as well with just song lyrics. The target audience also mentioned the idea was very unique but we had to present it differently compared to our inparation videos, maybe something they could relate to or understand. Overall our target audience are interested with our short film.
Prezi and Pitch
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Our song list so far
Eminem –berzerk –“We're gonna rock this house until we knock it down
So turn the volume loud, cause it's mayhem 'til the a.m”
Katty Perry –Roar – “Cause I am a champion and you’re gonna hear me roar”
Miley Cyrus – We Can’t Stop – “It’s our party we can do what we want”
LUKE BRYAN – that’s my kind of night -Yeah, that’s my kind of night!
Yeah, that’s my kind of night!
Dj Kicken – we need some alchohol
JUSTIN MOORE -Point At You “I still like to get a little crazy”
SELENA GOMEZ-SLOW DOWN “Cause I just wanna party all night in the neon lights 'til you can let me go”
Bruno Mars – Gorilla-“Ooh I got a body full of liquor with a cocaine kicker and I'm feeling like I'm thirty feet tall”
BRETT ELDREDGE-Don't Ya"-“Cause I can see you move a little closer,closerGirl I gotta get to get to know ya, know ya
BASTILLE-Pompeii-“Oh where do we begin?”
AUGUST ALSINA FEATURING TRINIDAD JAMES – I LUV THIS SH*T- Iluv it Iluv it
So turn the volume loud, cause it's mayhem 'til the a.m”
Katty Perry –Roar – “Cause I am a champion and you’re gonna hear me roar”
Miley Cyrus – We Can’t Stop – “It’s our party we can do what we want”
LUKE BRYAN – that’s my kind of night -Yeah, that’s my kind of night!
Yeah, that’s my kind of night!
Dj Kicken – we need some alchohol
JUSTIN MOORE -Point At You “I still like to get a little crazy”
SELENA GOMEZ-SLOW DOWN “Cause I just wanna party all night in the neon lights 'til you can let me go”
Bruno Mars – Gorilla-“Ooh I got a body full of liquor with a cocaine kicker and I'm feeling like I'm thirty feet tall”
BRETT ELDREDGE-Don't Ya"-“Cause I can see you move a little closer,closerGirl I gotta get to get to know ya, know ya
BASTILLE-Pompeii-“Oh where do we begin?”
AUGUST ALSINA FEATURING TRINIDAD JAMES – I LUV THIS SH*T- Iluv it Iluv it
Treatment
Treatment
This short film is a comedy based around a trio of geeks, who come up with a plan to throw their first house party before university in an attempt to become ‘popular’. They send invites via Facebook to a couple hundred people expecting a full house. Undeterred by the fact they have never experienced any sort of party other than the ones thrown by their parents each year for their birthdays and have never spoken to the majority of the people they invited, they go forward with their master plan. The three main characters are Oliver, James and Cedrick, they are an introverted group of childhood friends who have known each other since preschool, they are well educated and their hobbies include computer coding, reading and singing. In the first act they are all shown coming up with the idea and sending the invites from Facebook. There will also be some extras used which will play non speaking roles as ‘friends’ who turn up to the party, also we will use an attractive female character and male for the ending scene. The film last for around 4-5 minutes, it will consist of 3 different acts, the first in the bedroom when they send the invites, the second when they go shopping for alcohol and the third, the ‘party’. The first act will be set in the flat that they three friends currently live in, the basic props will include things such as a computer, case of books and guitar etc. The second act will be set in the streets and a shop, this is where the characters are shown confused on what to buy for their party. The third and final act will be in the room which is used for the actual party, here all of the actors will be shown, the main cast and extras, they will be shown drinking, smoking and trying to dance/sing. Towards the end of the scene the female actor will be shown in the street and the main cast will move outside for the ending scene. This short film will be targeted towards people of a similar age, young adults, people can relate to this film through past experiences such as their first house party at college or university. The main props for the whole film will be: computers, alcohol, cigarettes, money and books.
Case studies
The right
place
The narrative of the short film is based around a shop
keeper who has OCD, because of this obsession this causes him to lose his job
but then finds another job which accepts his eccentric personality. The tittle
‘Right Place’ can be in the sense that it refers to the stores items being in
the right place and also the idea of him searching for his right place in
society which he eventually finds in the end.
The conventions of a short film is through the way that it
revolves around one main idea and one main character it continues to build up
on the main characters personality. There is use of other characters but this
is enforce the main character.
This film has not been produced with high budget production
as aside from the ending credits which involve representation of bones. Many of
the camera shots used in this film were most common camera shots used to show
focus and help elaborate the idea of the shop keeper’s obsession.
The editing of the piece was cleverly constructed as the
techno beat music was introduced along with the main character.
Overall the film achieves so much in a short amount of time.
This film has got a humorous streak running through whilst staying sharp and
entertaining.
Songs in
real life
This is a YouTube video called ‘songs in real life’ it is
about a young man who makes short films based on everyday life. Not like a
normal short film this film contains music as well as dialogue. The main actor
in the film mimics the songs so that it seems as if he is singing. The songs
have been put in various areas of the short film.
This short film contains various camera shots such as close
ups to show the reaction on the characters face also long shots this shows the
setting of the short film and where it is filmed
The audience for this short film is mostly young adults as
they would find it funny on how music has been added in to create an impact.
Both males and females would be interested as they haven’t chosen a specific
audience. This also can relate to the teenagers. The replacement of the songs
is a great way to innovate and present the story as many songs can be put into
contexts and that is what they do.
The camera shots in this short film focus on the face while
they are lip singing the songs which have been synced. This makes the
expressions on their face funnier and adds humour to the story line. During
this short film short reverse to show the conversations going on. This gives
each character a chance to be the main topic, there is also a sense of movement
to the camera when medium shots are used this involves the audience as its made
more exiting as the camera is moving giving it an upbeat feel.
The characters are dressed like stereotypical teenagers with
their oversized backpacks. The scene of the film has been very strongly been
shown to be in a college as they show the classrooms. It makes it more
relatable to the target audience. Dialogue is replaced with songs (non-diegetic
sound) with some of the dialogue left untouched.
Steve is the main character has main focus and gets the main
attention. It gives the film more diversity in the personalities of the characters;
while Steve is the main protagonist, he’s not covered that much more than other
characters. This allows for the other characters to be as important as the main
characters.
Plastic Bag
This is a short film based on a Plastic bag, it was released in 2009. The film is narrated throughout telling the audience the journey of the bag. The bag is travelling through different conditions such as being thrown into the bin and being transferred to different places.
The story really draws in the audience as it can relate to a
person’s life, as when you’re created you have to find someone who loves you and
when they have to go how a person reacts. The only difference in this film is
that the bag can never die. The music fits in perfectly with the film and doesn’t
distract the audience from the narration as its calm.
In this short film there is a lot of use of point of view
shot. This shows the audience along with the narration what’s happening with
the bag. The close up camera shots show specific items which may not have been
narrated. There’s close up of different things such as wildlife and different
animals. Special effects we’re not used in this short film as the director kept
it as minimalistic to keep the simplicity of the film. So it can focus on the bag
only. The story line was generally slow and this maybe to relate to the bag
which hasn’t got anything anymore. Showing the slow paced journey.
For this film there isn’t a specific target audience but I would
say the audience would be people who are mature and are able to understand the
story line. From this I would take the idea of the wanderer’s journey and
explain it in a much greater detail. Also the film is very basic with the music
and narration but has been put together to fit in perfectly.
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